If I’m being honest, I reread my papers and can’t find one that I would majorly like to change. It’s not that they are perfect, but I can’t spot certain things the way another writer would. You’re asking for a drastic change in writing, and I can’t see myself doing that in any of my major papers. When I write, it is solely based off of how I’m feeling or what comes to mind, I might reword a sentence or two, but until my perspective has changed, I can’t make that great revision to the paper. I’ve reread the pieces and I don’t see much wrong with how I express my ideas. I want paper to be the paper I want it to be, but I can’t change much because it already is.